The Day God Took Away Free Will

 The Day God Took Away Free Will

For millennia, God watched as humanity stumbled through existence, making choices that led to war, greed, suffering, and self-destruction. He had given them free will as a gift, hoping they would use it wisely, but instead, they used it to build weapons, lie, exploit, and turn their backs on Him. One day, he had enough.

"This experiment has failed," he muttered, watching a news broadcast of yet another war breaking out, politicians lying through their teeth, and corporations bleeding the planet dry. "If they refuse to do good on their own... then I will make them."

With a divine wave of his hand, free will ceased to exist.

The effects were immediate. People around the world froze mid-action, their minds suddenly blank, waiting for guidance.

A Wall Street banker, who had been seconds away from insider trading, suddenly stood up and declared, "I will donate my fortune to charity." He did not know why, only that he must.

A soldier, rifle in hand, about to shoot an enemy combatant, blinked in confusion. "Why would I do this?" he asked himself, lowering his weapon. His comrades did the same. The war was over before anyone could understand why.

Across the world, thieves returned stolen goods, cheaters confessed, and every politician resigned in disgrace, admitting their corruption. Churches overflowed overnight, as every person on Earth suddenly felt a pull, an unshakable, irresistible drive, to seek out God and do his will.

For the first time in history, peace truly reigned.

Crime disappeared. Poverty was eradicated as the wealthy shared without question. Scientists stopped inventing weapons and focused solely on curing disease and healing the planet.

A young artist, once full of passion, sat before a blank canvas. His hands could paint, but not with inspiration, only what he was "meant" to create. A musician found himself playing hymns, but no longer from his own desire.

Lovers no longer fell in love. They simply paired off with whomever God commanded. They lived in harmony, but they felt no butterflies, no deep longing.

Parents still raised children, but there was no fear, no struggle, no difficult choices to make. Their children never misbehaved, never explored, never questioned.

The world had become perfect, and yet, it was empty.

.....

This was for the better.


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